Ladies and Gents,
This is the first round, so many of you are still getting in gear. I understand that. However, I have to judge you. (Haw Haw)
Most of the everyone's post were fun, I did enjoy them all. A general criticism, is there is a lack of atmosphere. I would like to see the reader drawn into your stories.
* Captain Koma; Your story didn't really go anywhere.
* West; Not bad. But I felt that you were never in any danger, and danger is like sex it sells.
* Ciera; I liked you post. Indy, always kicks butt. I can see you going far in this game.
* Sylar; I liked the cool runnings guy,but I couldn't follow your post.Also,the lol's were killing me.
* Hotstuff; You are funny, and handled your task very well. You post was kind of long. Next time, give us meat and veggies.
* Mr. Bennet; You are one bad dude. Last time, you made it to the final three. It might happen again, if you play with your post more. I seen you do better
* Merlyn Gabriel;You didn't even post did you...For Shame.
* Kon-El; Same as west, I never feel, that you are in danger, what is the point in a challenge,if seems easy for you.
* Professor X; You are very witty,show it.
* Gyrobo; Your post always make me feel like I have a ice cream headache, but I always go back for more.
* Nepharia; You did something I always enjoy, You tied others into your post.That makes a winner. you are on the right path.
* Erifia Apoc; You won the first LGS. You may again.
One post stood above the rest. It had twist and turns. It had danger. It gave me a headache, but it won.
Gyrobo is the winner.
Send your votes to Jon folks.
Dental for All.